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Post by dorian on Jan 23, 2008 21:21:35 GMT -5
Character Name:Dorian Hurst
Race:modifed Human
Race Description:what It sounds like A human who has been physicaly altered
Alignment: neutral
Physical Abilities:All physical abilites ans enses are incres far supierior to a humans
Magical Abilities:empath, telekentic, telepath, teleportation, calirvoyent, clairaudient, rakei, elemental control, shapeshifting, can manipulate The enovironment
Description: height-6'2,age-unkowen
Inventory:Two Desart eagles, and two long daggers ,Boots,aromored coast,Black pants
History:when I was 19 I was nearly killed. I will not say how or why I nearly died I was took in by a sceintest who rebuilt and modified my body and stop stopped me from physically ageing which is the reason why I still look like I am 21 but I am much older then most people
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Post by Liyah Windamier on Jan 23, 2008 21:46:03 GMT -5
welcome :] i hope you enjoy your stay here!! ^^
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Post by GrimFusion on Jan 24, 2008 1:32:44 GMT -5
I like the IDEA of your character, but the time period is all wrong. This RP plays during the mideval time period. You know, castles, knights, magic, and all that other old crap.
That doesn't mean you can't play. Just that you MAY have to change your character or your character's story a bit. To keep it old school, you might sub the scientist for an alchemist. You'd have to give up your two desert eagles in trade for a couple of long-blade daggers. Either that, or you could add that you traveled from a different time or dimension.
After you decide on that, I'd also ask you to describe your physical abilities (and limit them to 3) and dumb down your magical abilities (so you don't have more than 3). I limit all skill categories to no more than three to keep characters from power-playing and to ensure no one character is SO MUCH stronger than another.
Your description should give me a good idea about what you LOOK like. You know, red hair... pale skin... green eyes? Stuff like that.
I know that's a LOT of messing with your character sheet, but if you wanna play, that's what I ask.
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